Dear Mrs Plunkett…

I am very happy to have you as a teacher this year. In year 10 you helped me a lot and I think that you are a very good teacher. In the summer I didn’t get up to much, I mostly just worked (I still work at Black Peak Gelato) and hung out with friends. Some of my exam results surprised me as I did better than I thought I would in some subjects but I also flopped in others. In my English exams, I passed my essay which surprised me and I failed my unfamiliar text. This year I hope to expand and improve my literacy as I am not that good at it. I believe that this year you will be able to help me to achieve my goals and push me to my full potential. I think I will be able to work well in this class however I don’t get along with some of my classmates. I will need help to get started with the task that I am doing as I procrastinate a lot but once I start I can normally just keep going. This year I am going to use you for all the help I can get and make the most of having you as a teacher seeing as last year didn’t go too well for me. I struggle with putting together a good paragraph that flows.